Wednesday, April 13

Began writing body paragraphs of our essay. 

To start this we took our Structure sentences

EXAMPLE
Structure sentence: The use of Junior's awkward, but extroverted nature strengthens the idea that Junior feels out of place in a single community and wants to go beyond societal expectations

This sentence shows Juniors desire to fit in with the world, so we recast it into a topic sentence which will lead us to write a whole paragraph about this idea.
Topic Sentence: Junior views himself as an outcast who wants to be accepted for the person he is.

Then we follow our trusty old paragraph structure formula:
TS/PC/Q/CM/CM/CS.

Check out Mr. Restad's sample paper for a full paper example.